Water, Two Ways

You refract through me
like raindrops catching rainbows, piercing me with light.

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Water crushing roads,
folding cities into stones–
storms made from my love.

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I have found myself a part of the WordPress Blogging U for their poetry workshop. The theme was water, the form was haiku, and the device was simile. I think the second one is the best even though it’s more metaphor than simile. Enjoy! 🙂

4 thoughts on “Water, Two Ways

  1. Amazingly written! I love Haiku! You should try 3-5-3, and 2-3-2 or 1-2-1 if you’re feeling especially up to a challenge. I can’t wait to see what you write next!

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