You refract through me
like raindrops catching rainbows, piercing me with light.
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Water crushing roads,
folding cities into stones–
storms made from my love.
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I have found myself a part of the WordPress Blogging U for their poetry workshop. The theme was water, the form was haiku, and the device was simile. I think the second one is the best even though it’s more metaphor than simile. Enjoy! 🙂
Amazingly written! I love Haiku! You should try 3-5-3, and 2-3-2 or 1-2-1 if you’re feeling especially up to a challenge. I can’t wait to see what you write next!
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Thank you, as always! We will see what happens. I hope I can find the time each day. Weekends are so much better for my writing. And for my sanity! Haha! 🙂
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Love this version of water. So simple and forward with great images.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed them. 🙂
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