I loved you
out of possibility,
out of chance
and uncoordination.
We crashed
a moment too late,
so “what ifs?”
became “should haves”
before we felt the stop,
the heart-pounding end
of the accident of us.
It’s the “too late”
that gets us,
that breathes doubts
and desires
into our lungs,
and it’s the possibility
that knocks
ten thousand cracks
into our skin,
into the facades
we so carefully crafted.
We were only
“could have been”
and that’s what kills us
every time.
~Patience
Beautiful!!
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Thank you! ๐ ๐
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Everyone goes throught these emotions. Rarely anyone cant translate them from emotions and feeling to words.
I write too at times; try rather.
But these words are beautiful beyond words!
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That’s so nice of you to say! I’m glad you liked it so much! I try my best with my writing. Practice makes perfect or at least better, right? Thanks again for the nice comment and for reading. ๐ ๐
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The pleasures all mine!
Hope to read more of it.
Stay blessed!
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Powerful poem about lost opportunities – amazing vivid images in this piece.
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Phenomenal! Another piece of yours that I can’t seem to tear my eyes away from! Amazing work.
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Thank you so much for saying such nice things! ๐ ๐
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You’re very welcome! ๐
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Beautiful!
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My pleasure. ๐
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